The holidays are almost here! But hey, I'm not taking a break being on the lookout for articles that make it on the Internet but desperately need some "juice" to make them sizzle. Truth is, there's no shortage of websites, news items, and written stuff that are passable but can be injected with creativity. Here's a good one meant for Black Friday student shoppers:
Editor's
Critique:
As
a proofreader, I'm not bothered by the college-style writing. As an
editor, I find this article in utter need of creativity and depth. On
a positive light, the writer seems to have put a good amount of
effort in organizing a readable article meant for readers on the
student level. Apart from the redundancy of the word “serious,”
this text needed only moderate editing.
Source:
http://suite101.com/article/black-friday-shopping-tips-for-college-students-a263037
